Now that you’ve read about some revision techniques for your writing, it’s time to put those concepts to use!

For this worksheet, you’ll select 3 sentences from your Week 6 Persuasive Essay to edit using the techniques you’ve learned (specifically those located in part 3 of the reading, “Sentence-Level Revision.”)

Provide each original sentence, and then the revised version you’ve come up with. Then, in 1-2 paragraphs, discuss which technique(s) you used to revise your sentences, and why you think the new versions are superior.

Include your sentences and analysis in a document and submit it via this page to complete the assignment.

Your document should:

Be 12 pt, Times New Roman font, 1-inch margins, double spaced.
Include the original sentences from your week 6 paper, as well as the new revised versions and your 1-2 paragraphs discussing the changes you made.