Avoid the word( i ) can u delete it because its a Descriptive Essay.
make a clear thesis, and controlling idea.
Add more transition words, sensory
The instruction from the Dr
Write a 350-450 word essay describing a place in Saudi Arabia that would be interesting to foreign tourists to visit or patron. The place can be a national park, monument, historical place or building, beach, restaurant, store, or any place in Saudi you think would be interesting to an international traveler.
In your thesis statement, state the dominant impression in one word (adjective) similar to the examples provided on page 135 of the Arlov textbook. Make sure all (sensory) details in your description reinforce that dominant impression.
The final draft should be formatted according to APA guidelines covered in class and have an appropriate title.