Consider how you could have made the narration more fully reflect on the contents of the slide. In slide 5 A personal objective has been set and this would be improved if : 1. You link the element you wish to improve to some of the learning materials in the module with a citation. 2. You give a SMART action plan for the self development. Consider whether there are other personal objectives that could be set in the same way? In slide 6 A team development point has been discussed, however it is not clear what is meant: is it intended that performance reviews be added to project framework or post project review reports be used to reflect on individuals performance? There is some sense in what you are suggesting, however this needs to be clearly determined and linked to scholarly materials and an action plan, as I have explained above for slide 5. Citations should be used on slides and in your narration