This is just the first draft, doesn’t need to be amazing its a WR 121 class. note from instructions from instructor-” dont turn your essay into merely a summary of the issues offered in the argument you choose to analyze. Instead, make your essay a critique of and response to the arguments from the text with which you’re working. You may, if you wish, include outside sources to aid your arguments, but thats not required for this first assignment. If you do choose to use outside sources, take care to supply proper documentation (MLA will be fine) for your quotations, paraphrases, and summaries.”